ok guys i decided to draw again today but this time its not a painting and its not finished either D: i need some feedback on how its going so far and what i should chang or fix. Im already going to make the shorts shorter

 

Also i need to know the type of hairstyle remember shes adventuress

It's just a fucking sketch, how do you expect us to criticize that? A GOD DAMN SKETCH?

OP you can't think straight.

add more b(.)(.)b$

Hmm, give her long hair, I'd say. If you're gonna color it, make it a brunette.