I got commissioned a promotional video for an on-line store. Here you have the final result.

 

 

Any constructive criticism will be very much appreciated.

Overall its quite good except for the fact when you show the web browser the image quality isnt that good and you should have filmed when browser was in full screen mode

Yeah, Try editing the top of the web browser out (also, is it just me or is the quality of the "web browser" part kinda bad?). Already watched it, looks really good.

(also, is it just me or is the quality of the "web browser" part kinda bad?). Already watched it, looks really good.

Same here

Overall its quite good except for the fact when you show the web browser the quality isnt that good

Really good! I dont have anything bad to say (well I didint like the music, but that isnt "constructive" in any way)